Tuesday, September 23, 2008

PACK A DAY

This is my latest poetry class assignment. The assignment was to write a poem using Anaphora (repetition of a word or words at the beginning of two or more successive verses, clauses, or sentences). The following is a poem about smoking. Its best to read it through twice. It helps to both understand as well as completely let the poem sink in. Feel free to let me know what you think by leaving a comment at the bottom!

Pack A Day

 

Drag

     Drag

  Soak it up

Take it in

Elongate the dismount

And begin again.

Sit back

Relax

And engage in some Sin

 

Drag

     Drag

Take it all in

Every pore

Every follicle

Release a Cancerous grin.

 

Drag

      Drag

Drag it smooth

   Drag   it     rough

Just one aint enough

To keep me going

Puffing

       Puffing

             Puffing along

To this weary eyed song

 

Drag

     Drag

                      Let it out

            Take it in

       Take it in

    And in

And in

Just give me one more

I’ve got to feel it in my shins

 

Drag

      Drag

Die 


-Dave Swanson

Update on life

Hey all,
Sorry I haven't updated lately. been busy doing school work, with my part-time job, and trying to get ideas down on paper. So here's a little update on how things have been since last I've talked to you all.

First of all, the two things most prominent for me currently are my Web design class work and my poetry class. I am creating a band website for our first project (I have chosen flogging molly) and we had our first site layout critiques today. It went really well. My teacher really liked my website (although it is pretty extensive) and the only changes that needed to be addressed were primarily in text alignment. I am still weighing the pros and cons of uploading it to the blog (the file size and copyright issues being two big problems). So we'll see how it goes and I'll let you guys know. 

Secondly, I have been having alot of great things happen in my poetry class. my latest poem, which I will upload for you all to read and comment on shortly, is a beat poet-style Anaphora poem about smoking. My entire class really loved it (they quite comically broke into snaps when I finished reading it aloud), and the teacher only saw a few improvements that could be made for efectiveness.

besides Web Design and poetry, I have been busy just trying to stay productive, and stay creative in my free time, since I only have one real studio class this semester (which is web design). I will try to sketch some more over the rest of the week, but it really all depends on how things go. Hopefully I'll be able to get something up for you guys to see by the end of the week. if nothing else. I'll put up some older stuff once again (which i try to abstain from doing, but right now its all i have thats good). The Iron Lung concept has kind of tapered off since the school year started and I'm not sure if Its going to be continued or simply left for a later day. 

That's pretty much it for what I've been up to. I am going to try to be more active on the blog to make sure it doesn't fade off into oblivion like so many others. Thats all for now though. Hope to see you all soon!

- Dave Swanson

Wednesday, September 3, 2008

Offbeat doodles tonight

Hey everyone,
  Would like to let you all know that the Offbeat/doodle characters I have drawn recently are going to be uploaded later on tonight. I have a short break between classes today, but I will not be free until around 10pm. I will be sure to upload them first thing when I get back to my apartment tonight! 

Be sure to post some comments, let me know what you think, which character's your favorite, why you like or dislike any of them. Constructive critiques are always really helpful so throw down! 

See you all tonight! 

- Dave

Monday, September 1, 2008

NEW Iron lung sketch


Its getting better and better. I just need to work on my proportions/anatomy to get him all squared away. 




Coming soon #1

Coming soon:
  • A new Iron Lung Drawing
  • A bunch of offbeat doodle characters I created (these will be watermarked for my purposes. since there is a good chance I will use these characters in the future at some point) 

STOLI!!!