Sunday, August 10, 2008

THE BLADE

The second installment of poetry. again, written for my creative writing class in high school. Personally, I consider The Blade as my best work out of everything i've written up to this point. It was the only poem that actually gave me chills when I first proof read it. Its dark, and blunt, and stings a little. ENJOY!!! lol. 

THE BLADE

Twenty-one centimeters of tactical terror
Bringing dignity back to death.
For there lies no honor in lead,
No glory found in a gunstock.

The bullet simply passes through
like hot-blooded vagabond;
There is no lasting relationship.
You can divorce a bullet.
But I, I am a thorn
Eternally embedded in your side;
A splinter under your fingernail;
An inebriated party guest who just won’t hit the trail.

My methods are personal, And I like it that way.
Centuries of warfare made way for the potent perfection
That is my blade, so sharp, so unforgiving
As it parts the flesh
Like butter.

But here, here there’s no such thing as a hot knife.
No, only unforgiving fury and 
Cold.
Cold
Spreading
Slowly,
As the chill, 
The sinister arctic chill
Runs throughout,
as you dilate
And die.

No, No memories of mother
Or baby’s first steps.
Just the chill,
The chill,
The chill,
As you 
Fade

To 

Black


-Dave Swanson

2 comments:

Swany Ramblings said...

umm... hope you are thinking of actually doing this! this is scary.

Dave Swanson said...

Haha. Nope. I just did it for class. But I Enjoy doing dark poetry stuff like this because its not the sweet love stuff that people think of when you say "i write poetry"